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	<title>Comments on: Ingredients of a good Story</title>
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		<title>By: kendall</title>
		<link>http://jurmo.us/2007/05/06/ingredients-of-a-good-story/comment-page-1/#comment-14358</link>
		<dc:creator>kendall</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 24 Apr 2009 18:01:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This did not help me at all but pretty</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This did not help me at all but pretty</p>
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		<title>By: jon</title>
		<link>http://jurmo.us/2007/05/06/ingredients-of-a-good-story/comment-page-1/#comment-14351</link>
		<dc:creator>jon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 10 Mar 2009 04:49:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Excellent post, really benefited from that</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent post, really benefited from that</p>
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		<title>By: trigger imagination through story &#171; snippets of cloud</title>
		<link>http://jurmo.us/2007/05/06/ingredients-of-a-good-story/comment-page-1/#comment-13862</link>
		<dc:creator>trigger imagination through story &#171; snippets of cloud</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 27 Apr 2008 16:24:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Real Characters - you have to identify yourself in the characters Mystery - it triggers the imagination Rhythm - there are some timings which the experiencer expects a certain reveal or change Questions - create more insight in to yourself or the world Anticipation - triggers the imagination Surprise - shake up the experience Depth - creates the illusion in the imagination that the world exists Contrast - makes the original richer and more valuable. Contrasts are the basis of good story Climax - pays off the anticipation http://jurmo.us/2007/05/06/ingredients-of-a-good-story/ [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Real Characters &#8211; you have to identify yourself in the characters Mystery &#8211; it triggers the imagination Rhythm &#8211; there are some timings which the experiencer expects a certain reveal or change Questions &#8211; create more insight in to yourself or the world Anticipation &#8211; triggers the imagination Surprise &#8211; shake up the experience Depth &#8211; creates the illusion in the imagination that the world exists Contrast &#8211; makes the original richer and more valuable. Contrasts are the basis of good story Climax &#8211; pays off the anticipation <a href="http://jurmo.us/2007/05/06/ingredients-of-a-good-story/" rel="nofollow">http://jurmo.us/2007/05/06/ingredients-of-a-good-story/</a> [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Jurriaan Mous</title>
		<link>http://jurmo.us/2007/05/06/ingredients-of-a-good-story/comment-page-1/#comment-7192</link>
		<dc:creator>Jurriaan Mous</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 12 May 2007 14:15:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for trusting me your story!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for trusting me your story!</p>
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		<title>By: Rebecca L.R</title>
		<link>http://jurmo.us/2007/05/06/ingredients-of-a-good-story/comment-page-1/#comment-7189</link>
		<dc:creator>Rebecca L.R</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 May 2007 10:50:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hello this has helped alot, you see i&#039;m writeing a book i&#039;m a young writer (15 to be precise) and i&#039;m getting writers block alot of the time.If i have music on it sometimes helps alot.
Wouldn&#039;t mind if you could read over what i have so far? If you cant i dont mind.I just want to make sure i&#039;m going down the right path with my story.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello this has helped alot, you see i&#8217;m writeing a book i&#8217;m a young writer (15 to be precise) and i&#8217;m getting writers block alot of the time.If i have music on it sometimes helps alot.<br />
Wouldn&#8217;t mind if you could read over what i have so far? If you cant i dont mind.I just want to make sure i&#8217;m going down the right path with my story.</p>
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		<title>By: Jurriaan Mous</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jurriaan Mous</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 May 2007 08:42:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks <img src='http://jurmo.us/log/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Shirocco</title>
		<link>http://jurmo.us/2007/05/06/ingredients-of-a-good-story/comment-page-1/#comment-7187</link>
		<dc:creator>Shirocco</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 May 2007 06:07:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I found this insightful, cheers for putting it up mate.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I found this insightful, cheers for putting it up mate.</p>
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